Comments on: A Senior Moment

By: Rose

Rose — Sat, 31 Jul 2010 08:37:26 +0000

-nodnod- That's actually right…things have to be dug into before you can completely understand them sometimes. Thanks for the great comment!

By: Rose

Rose — Sat, 31 Jul 2010 08:35:01 +0000

Thank you!

By: Star5fallonmyheart

Star5fallonmyheart — Fri, 30 Jul 2010 00:01:15 +0000

That threw me when I saw the alien siblings. I was like “Um…do you mean 'alien' as in they're very unique and separate from the family? Well…yes, but the defintion of alien I had first was right too.

I love how you have these aliens wondering about story telling. The thing about story telling is that it doesn't always tell literal truths but rather expose deeper, more meaningful truths that literal story telling doesn't always offer. They may be lies on one level, but there's a grain of truth in each lie–and sometimes, the truth sprouts out. This was a fun, cute read

By: Miryam

Miryam — Thu, 29 Jul 2010 16:44:17 +0000

What a cute and creative story! Good dialog… mixed with excellent actions…

By: Mac Eagan

Mac Eagan — Thu, 29 Jul 2010 16:17:31 +0000

“Coming-of-old-age-allowance” I'll have to remember that. For when I reach old age. Oooh, that's not that far away.