A Tight Write can be a moment in time, a pause before the storm or a glimpse at eternity. And in the careful hands of Julie Mark Cohen, One Tight Write can be as safe as houses.

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Sheer Resistance

“Quite the house for a construction manager. Four-thousand square feet on a hillside. Why so many concrete walls?”

“They’re reinforced concrete.”

“Why? Aren’t you a wood expert?”

“Seismologists declared this region an active earthquake zone. The latest building code requires seismic-resistant shear walls. Reinforced concrete sounded the safest.”

“Nonsense. You wasted your money.”

“Look down the hill. See the new hospital? The rebar layout was too complicated to build. So, after dark, I secretly removed truckloads for my-”

The ground trembled.

“You did what?”

“My house!”

The two men ran from the crumbling structure.

“Your house? You fool. What about-”

The San Andreas is NOT MY FAULT!!!!

 
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  • http://profiles.yahoo.com/u/S4YN7HJTPBRVFTTUVXQTCBELQE Suzanne

    I almost knew there was going to be an earthquake before their conversation ended — (the writer in me HA HA!) This hits very close to home. The callous, unethical man who puts his house over the lives in a hospital. How appropo in today’s mentality.

  • M. Stang

    If the fools of construction were made public, how we would shudder in our houses without a quake. An entertaining bit of writing for so solum an issue.

  • Tlrelf

    Great piece, Julie. . .I felt the seismic shift all the way in Ocean Beach!

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  • Anonymous

    After the previous semester from this one (I can’t say last semester because this one just ended), things I learned about earthquakes are still fresh in my mind. Also considering we just had another earthquake a few days ago (I totally spammed your Facebook status about it!), this would rock my world if it were real. Ah, to greed.

  • Mac Eagan

    One of the worst things you can do after buying a house is remodel. Remodeling means demolition which means seeing what the original builder did. Which makes you wonder what he did in all the areas you can’t see.

  • Mac Eagan

    In the entire story there are only two sentences that are not dialogue. There’s not even a “he said” anywhere in sight. No wasted words whatsoever. Did you use reinforced verbiage? The writing is strong.

  • http://www.awordwithyoupress.com/ Thornton Sully

    Julie is a structural engineer. She reinforced concretely, not verbiagely.

  • Kiakiali

    Timely. The shift in the story, I mean. Tight write, indeed.

  • Julie

    Everybody, thanks for your comments.
    I’m hoping beyond hope that my story was purely fiction. Happy Holidays!